section A: I have missed school once and was late once so far other than that I was here the whole time. I have been doing the best I can paying attention to you as you talk about what ever you talk about and write down the more important things, Until the laptops got here I was doing my work at my house and still keeping on task. Personal mark of 23/25
section B: My total assignment completion, well I have 7 post not including this one
and I think it's because I combine multiple assignment that are roughly the same into one post, I also have done the Google docks thing and all the commenting assignments but other than that I haven't gone out the way to comment on multiple peoples post in my spare time. Personal mark of 19/25
section C: Assignment quality, I've said it before and I will say it again when I write I go for quality over quantity, and then on the other side it's possible that I could improve by writing more and add some more pictures because I don't have a ton. Comparing my work to others it's clear I have less words and pictures, those are two ways I could improve. Personal mark of 17/25
section D: class contribution, I chose picture
Just because it may have started some thought even though it was backwards.
I have helped people at my table and others subtlety but that's about it. Personal mark of 14/25
out of all this I would give myself a C+, you may decide to lower it or raise it but I think this is what I deserve.
This is great JJ. I appreciate that you are looking at you own work critically and have found two specific ways to improve. Length is not quality BUT it is very hard to be meaningfully engaged AND brief. That is why Haikus are easy but good Haikus are extremely difficult… or… that is why a simple white screen/store for most is boring but when Apple does it is amazing. First we need to get it all out… then we need to refine it. :) You are missing the mark for each section and a total… I would prefer to leave it as is but legally you need a percentage. What would you give yourself out of 25 for each?
ReplyDeleteI believe this adds up to 73%… which is barely a B… I'm fine with that. I look forward to more of your wit, but also a concise effort to make your thoughts clear and concise in formal essays. :)
ReplyDeleteI think you should put a bit more effort and you will be good in this class.
ReplyDeleteYou're doing good!! Just put a little more effort in and you'll be great! :)
ReplyDeleteI like the evidence you provided, and how you criticized your work. Maybe next time add more effort to your assignments.
ReplyDeleteEffort is essential, but your humor in this class keeps us pretty happy, just try harder. :D
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